krispykritter ([personal profile] krispykritter) wrote2025-06-18 02:05 pm
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TheRealLJIdol-week 1-Quality

You gaze at the stars.
I enjoy the quiet of the night and the soft chirping of the crickets.
You admire a very handsome stranger as they pass by.
I stop to listen to someone’s voice that if they were even reading the dictionary I’d be entranced.
You talk about the amazing cinematography in the latest film.
I hear the music from the same film’s score and ask you if you noticed how it added to the magic.
You talk about reading the latest bestseller.
I tell you about how the narrator in the audiobook made the story come alive.
You drive your car everywhere in your solitary bubble.
I walk in companionable steps with my dog at my side, stopping to chat with a passerby.
You admire the changing of the leaves in the fall.
I smell the first cold snap of autumn in the air.
You admire the holiday light displays at Christmas.
I catch the first snowflakes on my tongue.
You ask why I am so happy.
I smile, scratch my dog’s ears, smell the fresh cut grass and listen to a distant crow calling its friends.
That, I say, is quality of life. Can you say the same?
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[personal profile] drippedonpaper 2025-06-18 11:08 pm (UTC)(link)
You did a great job showing how...using the other senses can help someone more richly experience life. I do believe we find what you look for.

Your poem is lovely and reminds us that happiness exists if we listen for it, taste it, etc.

I really enjoyed your poem :)