What I like about this piece is how it reads like a screenplay, almost like there's an invisible line separating the speaker from the other figure, like splitscreen in a movie. At some point the line disappears and they melt together, or one of them disappears. I don't know if that was your intention, but I enjoyed it!
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Date: 2025-06-19 04:17 am (UTC)